Wow.

Finally a profesional looking flash on Newgrouds.
I really liked the japanese vocals, it made it sound like a real anime.
Normally I don't like Mecha and stuff, but this looked rather nice. Good work on the 3d as well.
I don't think there is something wrong with the subtitles, but I am a fast reader. ;)
Just a few things that bugged me, in the beginning where it says '7 days ago', it would have made more sense if that was in japanese with a sub under it that said '7 days ago'. And also the ending where you suddenly see 'chapter 1 the end' was kinda out of the blue. But that could just be me. I would have preferred a fade out to black with 'the end' or something like that. Ah well.
Overall it looks awesome and can't wait ot see more of it. :3